Mar 12 2008
A Word with You
Someone is playing a note on a cello. It’s a low note, and as the bow moves deliberately across the string, the vibrations move through the air and into your body, where it reaches your very core. And you feel it, inside. That note has literally resonated inside of you. It’s such a fascinating feeling. And so to continue on with the theme that has developed this week–words, arranged in such a way, can do the same thing: resonate inside of us.
A poem that resonates with us causes either an empathetic or sympathetic response that binds us to those words. And it may be the sympathetic reaction that is the most powerful, because it gives us insight into something that we have not experienced ourselves.
As Merwin suggests in The Unwritten maybe all we need is one word. We just need to find it out, somehow. And he has let us know that it will not be easy. Anything that cannot be tempted by such eternals as love or time are going to be tricky to get at. Not even the threat of fire will yield up that word to us. We are left to puzzle, then. How? The poem has such a tantalizing ending. You are guaranteed to look at each pencil a little more reverently.
So maybe we haven’t discovered that word or words yet. But maybe it’s a word we can work around, hint at. Maybe that’s all poetry is, hinting around at what we really need. You know when you read it, if a poem’s gotten close.
A good line in a poem can make me positively giddy; make me laugh out loud with delight, even if the subject matter may be serious. Often lines require the context of the other lines that surround it, the whole poem is created for a reason; but this line by the late Leslie Norris says just as much outside of the poem as it does inside the poem it resides in.
Read it: There. Can you feel it? And now you know. That’s the way you want to go, isn’t it.
And Sally Taylor, her mother dying in the next room
heard women’s voices, young and laughing,
come into fetch the old lady. (from the poem Borders)
(FYI: This post taken and reworked a bit from an early post written for Bells on Their Toes.)